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This week I have been using a range of language features to help make my writing more descriptive. Some language features we have been talking about are similes, metaphors, personification and onomatopoeia.
These are my favourite sentences from my writing this week and it was about soccer. Our writing was about describing a moment in time. I wrote
Woooooooossssssshhhhhhh! The ball curved past my head like a bullet train zooming through the tunnels.
Hi Nathaniel
ReplyDeleteWow! I like how you have used onomatopoeia and a simile to help the reader feel like they are right there in that moment. Keep up the great work.
From Miss Fortes
Thanks Mrs for giving me that wonderful comment.
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