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This week I have been using a range of language features to help make my writing more descriptive. Some language features we have been talking about are similes, metaphors, personification and onomatopoeia.
These are my favourite sentences from my writing this week and it was about soccer. Our writing was about describing a moment in time. I wrote
Woooooooossssssshhhhhhh! The ball curved past my head like a bullet train zooming through the tunnels.
